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jgepowers

Joined: 04 May 2009 Posts: 72 Location: NJ Shore
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Posted: Wed Jul 01, 2009 7:10 pm Post subject: "The Bradford Family Saga " Part 9b (Conclusion)
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The Bradford Family Saga Part 9b
by j.g.e. powersİ
"Penny for your thoughts," Marsha said quietly.
"Oh, Hi, honey. Did I wake you?"
Marsha shook her head. "No, I don't think so. I've been watching your face for a
couple of minutes. I think I know what you were dreaming about." There was a
wicked gleam in her eye. "You were reliving it, weren't you?"
Carol just smiled.
"God, that was hot! Is it always that way?"
"No. Just at special times, like then. I've had three- ways before," she said
nonchalantly, "but this time was something else."
"Because it was family?"
Carol looked at her lovely daughter, an image of her younger self, smiled and
kissed her lightly. "Yes," she said, "because it was family."
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Mr. and Mrs. Goodman sat on their veranda and listen to the tinkle of laughter
coming over the wall from the Bradford pool area.
"They certainly seem to be enjoying their reunion. That really was a nice party,
wasn't it, Arnold? They're such a lovely family."
"Yes, it was, Mildred. You don't see that kind of togetherness anymore, not
much, anyway. Makes me wish our kids were more like theirs."
"You're right, dear, they do seem to have something special." Mrs. Goodman
paused, then turned to her husband.
"I wonder what their secret is?" |
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jgepowers

Joined: 04 May 2009 Posts: 72 Location: NJ Shore
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Posted: Tue Jul 07, 2009 6:03 pm Post subject: ?????
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| Not one reply. Anyone out there? Love it? Hate it? |
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kmdracer
Joined: 24 Oct 2008 Posts: 2
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Posted: Tue Jul 07, 2009 8:15 pm Post subject:
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| I like what I have read so far..just the first couple of chapters...Haven't had time to read all yet...good job though! |
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shitforbrains Moderator

Joined: 07 Sep 2007 Posts: 2973
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Posted: Wed Jul 08, 2009 4:59 pm Post subject:
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| It's a long story. I haven't gotten through he whole thing, yet, but what I've read is pretty darned good writing. |
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stric9
Joined: 08 Apr 2009 Posts: 9
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Posted: Wed Jul 08, 2009 5:47 pm Post subject:
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| Just finished reading the whole thing. Wow! That was extremely erotic and very well written. The only thing that could have helped it, not that it needed any, would have been pics of people you thought resembled those in the story. Great Job. |
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jgepowers

Joined: 04 May 2009 Posts: 72 Location: NJ Shore
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Posted: Mon Jul 13, 2009 2:28 pm Post subject:
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| stric9 wrote: |
| Just finished reading the whole thing. Wow! That was extremely erotic and very well written. The only thing that could have helped it, not that it needed any, would have been pics of people you thought resembled those in the story. Great Job. |
Thanks for hangin' in and finishing the story & thanks for the kind words.
I've always wished that someone could illustrate the more graphic scenes. I'm way not technical. |
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