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jaime

Joined: 20 Jun 2007 Posts: 1111 Location: England
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Posted: Sat Aug 04, 2007 2:48 pm Post subject: AMANDA - the final chapters
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Note. I should point out that these last two chapters of the 'Amanda' story are the products of my own imagination. It would be as well to read the Amanda story by Freescott, posted by Travelingman and Mephistopheles first.
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Jenny was now 3 years old. Amanda had insisted on naming her daughter after her mother, having realised how much Jen had had to sacrifice (and suffer) to enable Amanda and John to fulfil their dream of a deeply loving relationship culminating in the birth of their beautiful daughter.
Jen had become a doting grandmother. Amanda had hoped that that would happen after her mother had become so attached to Elaine's first baby, Bree.
Meanwhile, Amanda had been able to continue helping John at the office. She had had so much help, not only from her mother, but, surprisingly from her friend Cloe. Cloe had proved to be the biggest help of all her friends, despite her initial horror at the thought of Amanda giving birth to her father's child.
Amanda had left school at the age of 16. John and Jen had wanted her to go on to college, but Amanda wanted to devote all her time to looking after Jenny and helping her Daddy at work.
By now, she was getting broody again, and one day at the office, Elaine was telling her about Robert's latest activities. (Robert was Elaine's second child, and he had just taken his first steps). Elane soon realised that Amanda had 'switched off' and had that faraway look in her eyes. 'Come on, spill', said Elaine. 'You know you can't keep any secrets from me'. Amanda replied 'I haven't told Daddy yet, but I would love a little brother for Jenny'. (Amanda had gone back on the pill shortly after Jenny's birth).
Elaine said 'The sooner you tell John how you feel the better. You know that I will support you all the way'. 'Thanks, Elaine. I don't know what I would do without you. You're my dearest friend. 'All part of the service', said Elaine, with a huge grin on her face.
That evening, Amanda and John were enjoying a leisurely fuck. She had started by giving him one of her amazing blowjobs, and was now on her hands and knees, waiting for John to penetrate her delectable cunt from behind.
She suddenly saiid 'Daddy, what would you say if I said that I want another baby?'. John turned her over and stroked her face. 'I was wondering how long it would be before that came up - I'm surprised it didn't happen a year ago!'. 'Oh Daddy, can we try then?'. 'Of course, Sweetie, as soon as you like'.
Concluded in the next chapter. |
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jaime

Joined: 20 Jun 2007 Posts: 1111 Location: England
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Posted: Sat Aug 04, 2007 3:42 pm Post subject: The final chapter.
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Amanda stopped taking the pill immediately, but nothing happened for six months. She decided to try to replicate exactly the way she and John had 'performed' on the night that Jenny was conceived. After the usual blowjob, Amanda sais 'Daddy, do you want to cum this way?'. John smiled, laid her gently on the bed, got between her legs and carefully entered her. Soon they were thrusting hard against each other. Eventually, John came strongly in her, and she had a very powerful orgasm at the same time. As soon as he got his breath back, he said 'Sweetie, I love you so much. You will never know just how much'. John's cock then emerged from her cunt with a plop, as he flopped over to lie beside her. Suddenly, he clutched his chest and groaned. Amanda realised that something was wrong, and called for her mother. Jen came at once, took one look at John, then
dashed out into the hall to phone for an ambulance.
John was rushed to the hospital, with Jen and Amanda holding his hands all the way. He was immediately taken into the Cardiac Unit, while Amanda and Jen were told to wait outside. Eventually, a tall doctor came out with a grim look on his face. 'No!', screamed Jen and Amanda together. 'I am so sorry', said the doctor. 'Mr. Carmichael never regained consciousness but I assure you that we did all that we could to save him'.
While they had been waiting outside the theater, Amanda had phone Ernie, so the limo was waiting to take them home. Jen and Amanda just hugged each other all the way home. Cloe had been looking after Jenny while Amanda and her mother were at the hospital, and she made them a stiff drink when they got home.
Jen was upset, naturally, but Amanda was heartbroken. She had never loved anyone but her Daddy, and had always said that, if anyone took him away from her, she would want to die. She was in such a state of total despair that the tell-tale signs of morning sickness went unnoticed at first. Jen soon saw what might be happening, and she bought a pregnancy testing kit at the local pharmacy. She gently persuaded Amanda to try it, and, sure enough, Amanda was pregnant with her beloved Daddy's child.
Just before her 17th birthday, Amanda gave birth to a healthy baby boy. She had been hoping for a boy, and had decided on his name months ago - it could only be John.
THE END? |
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Travelingman Site Admin

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Posted: Sat Aug 04, 2007 6:23 pm Post subject:
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I always wondered how it would end, congratulations. _________________ Fantasy is Fun........Administrator |
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jaime

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Posted: Thu Jan 03, 2008 1:51 pm Post subject:
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| Travelingman wrote: |
| I always wondered how it would end, congratulations. |
Thank you, Travelingman. It's good to know you approve. _________________ INCEST is just an anagram of NICEST. |
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jaime

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Posted: Tue Apr 29, 2008 8:45 pm Post subject:
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Bumped for new members. _________________ INCEST is just an anagram of NICEST. |
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jaime

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Posted: Sun Jun 29, 2008 10:56 pm Post subject:
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Bumped again for new members. _________________ INCEST is just an anagram of NICEST. |
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DocSavage7 Site Admin

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Posted: Thu Jul 24, 2008 1:56 pm Post subject:
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I'm glad you 'bumped' this jaime... always good to read a story with a conclusion. Well written, Thx!
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jaime

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Posted: Sat Jul 26, 2008 10:21 pm Post subject:
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| docsavage7 wrote: |
I'm glad you 'bumped' this jaime... always good to read a story with a conclusion. Well written, Thx!
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Thanx, doc. It was my first attempt at writing an erotic story, albeit a short one! _________________ INCEST is just an anagram of NICEST. |
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jaime

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Posted: Sun Dec 21, 2008 11:22 pm Post subject:
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Bumped again for new members. _________________ INCEST is just an anagram of NICEST. |
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Jen

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Posted: Sun Jan 11, 2009 7:55 pm Post subject:
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I pray the kids continue the lifestyle with one another _________________ Sweet Incest-The most perfect love.
Intrafamily procreation |
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cable789

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Posted: Fri Mar 13, 2009 7:48 pm Post subject:
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I was wondering how this would end! Thanks Jaime! _________________ Admiral of the fleet, and C.I.C. of Star-fleet Intelligence.
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jaime

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Posted: Mon Mar 16, 2009 11:01 pm Post subject:
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| cable789 wrote: |
| I was wondering how this would end! Thanks Jaime! |
You are welcome, cable. Nice to see you back on here. I've been away myself for a
while. _________________ INCEST is just an anagram of NICEST. |
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cable789

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Posted: Tue Mar 17, 2009 5:37 pm Post subject:
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I am glad to be back home! _________________ Admiral of the fleet, and C.I.C. of Star-fleet Intelligence.
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jaime

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Posted: Sun May 17, 2009 9:31 pm Post subject:
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Bumped again for kromwell's benefit! _________________ INCEST is just an anagram of NICEST. |
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JD65 Site Admin

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Posted: Sun May 17, 2009 9:40 pm Post subject:
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Welcome back jaime, you`ve been missed! _________________ It is what it is...
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